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A man pitches a show called "Meme City"
My youtube - youtube.com/lazypillow
Whats a meme?
I don't find the humor, but you do have a unique drawing style
Yes, memes are stupid and way too many people rely on them in the place of humor. Too bad you didn't really do anything original with the sentiment.
That is NOT a meme. It's forced bullshit from the mind of a very sad manchild who gets off to people being kicked in the groin.
Lack of story
It´s a nice flash, a bit short but the animation part is cool.
It´s just that it isn´t interesting whatsoever due to the lack of a storyline. As soon as that guy starts to get crazy and bleed out of his eyes, I lose interest. It just doesnt goes anywhere!
So try a bit more of a storyline for improving. The fact that it´s a short doesn´t means it can´t have a storyline.
Personally, I love memes, but this pretty much sucked.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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