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So this is my shitty little cartoon about RayWilliamJohnson being brutally murdered.
He is an untalented piece of shit.
Watch this on YouTube if it helps at all: http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=sZrO_kqMJDY
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I use to like RWJ when I was younger......
But now, I just flat out HATE him. This flash is funny on a scale of " casual joke". It isn't really laugh out loud or unpredictable. It's very predictable. The animation was fluid and colorful.
Haters Gonna Hate.
I guess we all have haters.
Nothing new here.
Animation got 5 stars.
The rest is all shit.
Really? The dude makes fun of HIMSELF in ways far funnier... Anyway, this would have been good if it didn't involve only blowing RWJ's brain with a shotty. Not only is it unoriginal (he even did a joke like that), but it really isn't funny... No irony, no arguments or goofy fights, no smart dialogue... You could have tried way harder. The animation is clean and nice, but as I always say: "Painting a turd in pretty colors doesn't make it any more exciting". If you really hate him that much, at least try to make your attack on him interesting... Or smart, in any case (There's not much information or exposition of how bad he is, either)
It's meant to be short and snappy. I wasn't planning on going in depth with the entire thing. I did mention in the description that it was a "shitty little cartoon."
Don't get me wrong, you are definitely a talented animator. Your art style is cool, and your movements are fluid. Its just the comedy part that you lack at. The story in this was terrible and it wasn't funny at all. I'm not trying to be mean, I just think you should put your talent to better use. OH and by the way I hate RWJ too, so I'm not saying this because I'm a fan boy or anything.
Animation is what saved it from a zero. Just seemed too simple. Like hater flashes but seen much better. Just sayin.
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