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Jan 30, 2012 | 2:50 PM EST
  • Daily Feature January 31, 2012

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Holy crap, I finished this WAY sooner than I thought I would!

This is the official second addition to the "Plot" series. If you have a suggestion for another upcoming game (or even movie), let me know... but it has to be an UPCOMING game. Not a game like Portal 2, or Shadow the Hedgehog.

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powerdude964powerdude964

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 30, 2012

At least it's better than your older work

This was pretty good, and FAR better than I expected.

Artwork: Pretty good. This the actually the one thing (aside from animation movement) that you've consistently done well throughout your different animations. Well done.

Voice acting: Great new voice actors, James! Normally I don't like the sound of your voice and the microphone, but that's just me. When I noticed the new voice actors in this, however, I was pretty happy. Good job.

Humor: It's hard to describe the humor in this flash animation. I much rather prefer subtle humor though, cause it seems like you use very random, yet very obvious and predictable jokes and such. I don't consider it much of a problem, but sometimes when you're really trying to get a laugh outta me, you barely do anything at all. Then again, it doesn't help that I rarely ever laugh at anything unless it's extremely funny. Trust me, if you got me laughing to the point where my eyes water, you've got some pretty funny stuff.

OVERALL: Very good improvement from your previous videos. I would like to see more. You just need to improve on other things as well. Combine subtle humor with not-so subtle humor. Well, that's really all I can suggest.

+Good Voice Actors
+Good Artwork
+Good Animation Movement

-Not very good humor
-A tad bit predictable

^That would be the only way to really sum this up in a short way. I hope you like my review, and I also hope to see more from you in the near future.

-Powerdude964, OUT!

P.S, I also made a review of Through The Flash Portal. Please take my advice from it!


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MadwonMadwon

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 30, 2012

Too funny !!

Once again, proof that you don't need the best art for a top notch flash ! Glad you got this finished in time for this months vote. Will be among my top 10. Great Job !!


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