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Jan 28, 2012 | 10:34 PM EST

Author Comments

My first actually good thing that I've submitted to Newgrounds. This is one of my first flash animations, so please point out anything you think I need to improve on. You can watch the series on YouTube here:
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=0CXA2zrP7Pk

Reviews


diamonxdiamonx

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 14, 2013

the guy with the cap idea made me laugh. also how are ufos so fragile? do they have a pen is? if they do noah hit them right in the spot.



Coolio75650932Coolio75650932

Rated 5 / 5 stars April 20, 2013

THROW THE LIGHT BULBS!



Don-JackimoDon-Jackimo

Rated 2 / 5 stars January 29, 2012

Good effort

I liked the story. I think some of the jokes were let down by poor sound quality. Because you are relying mostly on dialogue for this animation i think it is important that you can hear it properly. The sound was peaking alot. The art style was simple but effective, i think it could stiil be improved tho. The animation was okay, but considering you are using quite a simple character design i think it could have been better. Over all i liked it and think it has potential. Pretty good for a first submission.



Merkury313Merkury313

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 29, 2012

not bad. especially for early work.

I enjoyed this. Most of the jokes were pretty solid. This one actually had a plot unlike the last 3 new submissions I watched. So thanks for that. You had, Super Metroid, Epic Sax man AND American Dad reference there so bonus points for that.

Definitely a little too much yelling. A fair bit of it was completely unnecessary. Honestly the yelling was my biggest gripe.

I wont take off points for the animation as you said it was one of your first animations. Plus like I mentioned earlier yours actually had animation unlike a lot of new subs.

TL,DR you did a good job. Less yelling. Keep up the good work.


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Mrnubnub responds:

Got it. Less yelling, more awesome.


YotianYotian

Rated 1 / 5 stars January 28, 2012

horrible

slideshow a rama


Mrnubnub responds:

It's a movie. That's what movies are.