Noah's big book episode 1
- Score:
- rated 2.43 / 5 stars
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- Genre:
- Comedy - Original
- awesome
- funny
- animation
- stickfigures
Credits & Info
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Producer Mrnubnub
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Other ~NK~ "Headrush"
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Credits Midnight Techo Groove
- Uploaded
- Jan 28, 2012 | 10:34 PM EST
- File Info
- Movie
- 2.8 mb
Author Comments
My first actually good thing that I've submitted to Newgrounds. This is one of my first flash animations, so please point out anything you think I need to improve on. You can watch the series on YouTube here:
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=0CXA2zrP7Pk
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars 5 days ago
the guy with the cap idea made me laugh. also how are ufos so fragile? do they have a pen is? if they do noah hit them right in the spot.
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 20, 2013
THROW THE LIGHT BULBS!
Rated 2 / 5 stars January 29, 2012
Good effort
I liked the story. I think some of the jokes were let down by poor sound quality. Because you are relying mostly on dialogue for this animation i think it is important that you can hear it properly. The sound was peaking alot. The art style was simple but effective, i think it could stiil be improved tho. The animation was okay, but considering you are using quite a simple character design i think it could have been better. Over all i liked it and think it has potential. Pretty good for a first submission.
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 29, 2012
not bad. especially for early work.
I enjoyed this. Most of the jokes were pretty solid. This one actually had a plot unlike the last 3 new submissions I watched. So thanks for that. You had, Super Metroid, Epic Sax man AND American Dad reference there so bonus points for that.
Definitely a little too much yelling. A fair bit of it was completely unnecessary. Honestly the yelling was my biggest gripe.
I wont take off points for the animation as you said it was one of your first animations. Plus like I mentioned earlier yours actually had animation unlike a lot of new subs.
TL,DR you did a good job. Less yelling. Keep up the good work.
Got it. Less yelling, more awesome.
Rated 1 / 5 stars January 28, 2012
horrible
slideshow a rama
It's a movie. That's what movies are.