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i'm the white dragon now.
thanks for all the liking of the concept of this flash.
the woman involved is no longer who she once was.
I C WUT U DID THAR.
HI, LARIOUS! ILOVE DEVERY MIN UTE O FIT! ESP ECIAL LY T HEPART WI THT HE T WOGU YS.
i didn't do anything beside whats on the direct surface
Very Sweet and Symbolic!
I may not be familiar with your cartoons aside from your Robot Day submission, but this is your best submission to date. In addition, this is proof that you don't need a huge file in order to be worth watching.
Graphics: Clever use of silhouette, cutout tweening, and selective color. I really like how you eased the tweens during the last part. Some people could learn a thing or two from you.
Music: I loved the non-usage of sound effects and voices. However, it could have used more emotional music. (Search the Audio Portal for Buffalo Lullaby.)
Content: You had Nice direction, staging, and pacing for something like this. On the other hand, this wasn't the first flash of its kind considering "In Memory of Elle" and "A Lovely Dream." Then again, I understand that not everything needs to be 100 percent original in order to be enjoyable.
-Great tween animation, although I'm more into Frame-by-Frame animation.
-Excellent direction, staging, and pace.
-Clever use of symbolism, silhouette, and selective color.
What's left to be desired:
-Could have used more emotional music
-Not the first flash to deal with a loved one.
Overall: Pants, would you like a ten from me?
the "whats left to be desired" list about made me cry with joy. thank you so much for such a professional review =)
and i'd love a ten, even if it seems slightly forced lol
just touching i actaully feel sadness and almost had watery eyes
let the sadness flow through you! =)
MAKE ANOTHER ONE WITH A DAMN HAPPY ENDING!! :,,,,(
poor dragons coudnt be toghether forever D:
no. sequels make the original seem worse. this is a story. let it be a story
The animation and the story are beautiful, and truly heart-warming. A part of me still desires the type of story you wrote, but unforunately it's not realistic at all in todays society. I'm not sure where you are at in terms of your life philosophy regarding relationships, but I highly recommend researching blogs such as RooshV. You will gain a lot of insight into why women act the way they do.
Anyways, I digress....beautiful animation. Look forward to more from you in the future.
thank you =)
i don't have any doubt in my mind why she did what she did. she was sociopathic from the start. the part that doesn't make any sense to me is why it lasted 22 months.
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