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Jan 25, 2012 | 1:24 PM EST

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Ladies and gentlemen, those who have took the time to have a look at this small piece I put together, I thank you on that note I'd love to here some flash advice or how to improve. If you'd like to drop me some animation tips this would prove most useful, I normally program in php so flash is a whole new world to me and why not come to the best place on the internet where flash games are shared to seek out a good view and ideas or even things I've missed.

I'd like to state before anyone comments, this is only a mere page of coding at best but I was so happy and joyful I thought I'd share it now to see where I could take the idea.

Thank you, Chris.

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kalz1991kalz1991

Rated 1 / 5 stars January 25, 2012

Loud music

Remember I have other tabs open. If you go and blast the music you will make players rage. Good luck.


SovietChris responds:

Yes, I forgot all about the music issue. It never seemed all that bad at first... Now I hate the song. Thank you for taking the time to comment and play! <3


lord-raikohlord-raikoh

Rated 1 / 5 stars January 25, 2012

Hmmm how to inprove

Okay i see a good start ^^ yes i think you know this game is not original but i wont base my reviews on type of game. It will be rude and it cannot be judge.

-Good point-

-The music is good but wierd XD i dont think it fits the game.

-inportant to know ! -

-Okay you could have a play buttom but if you dont know you can ask or find about play buttoms.
- Instuction ... i am still searching where is the move buttoms or even a hints. This is important for a game.
- It will be best for if you could place a mute buttom or pause. Still you can find how to place buttoms on the web. but i dont know where.

-How to inprove-

-Okay you can maybe place a story about your caracter it important but now for the moment because your starting to make games. If you need ideas you can pm me ^^ ill be happy
-originality of concepte = make something that will make you unique ! ^^
- graphic ... your starting so dont rush on that now you need to work on coding and conception. But it corlofull

maybe with that you can become better at flash and making game ^^ hope i help you and dont rush yourself or your work will be destroye.

P.S sorry for my bad english


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SovietChris responds:

Thank you :) Don't worry about your English! Your review is most interesting, I have taken into account all your points and I am most pleased with this review!


Juggalo-goddamnitJuggalo-goddamnit

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars January 25, 2012

for a first try, , ,

not bad, just a couple of suggestions I could think of off the top of my head, a replay button and a preloader screen (rather than just jump right into a hellish rain of cupcakes). The music wasn't the worst thing I have heard in my life, although a mute button would have been nice. Also possibly a story of some shape or form, like why are cupcakes falling? Did Pinkie Pie go insane and start chucking cupcakes at the world? I dont know. Doesn't need to go on the blam list, just needs some polish. . . a lot, and maybe levels, or somethng that can fall and hurt you if you catch it. Thats just off the top of my head. Keep practicing, you'll get it.


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SovietChris responds:

Haha a hellish rain of cupcakes that made me giggle :), A mute button is seeming most important, I've now heard this track one too many times myself...

A story? Hmm I've never thought of a story before this was just a school project that I got way to into but yes! I like this idea!

For a leveling system, This could prove most likable If I do the level curve right and add things to take away from your current score

I thank you for this productive and most insightful feedback <3