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art work wasn't good. the person's anatomy was way off and the use of colors was horrifying. No shade it looks as if you made this in two hours. No actual animation just two repeating frames of piss.
-STORY-
No story at all, nothing to find good about this.
-AUDIO-
well at least you put a song. Not the greatest fitting song but I see what you're trying to accomplish with a dramatic song. Something you might put in mind that the song itself does not loop, you should look into that.
-ORIGINALITY-
I must say I have to give you points for originality. I don't think anyone else here has thought of a scene were a man pisses, looking at the sun while dramatic music is playing.
OVERALL
not one of my favorites I don't find this funny at all, and think you have way more to improve on before you ever touch flash again. But I guarantee if you work hard on it and practice more you will eventually be a top-notch animator.
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars August 24, 2012
EPIC OVERLOAD: System overheating. Shutting down...
Best animation on newgrounds
yup
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 17, 2012
This is just outstanding I cried
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 8, 2012
Zebra Humor hopes all of your dreams come true!
Rated 5 / 5 stars March 19, 2012
Holy... , this is too epic :D
lol
Rated 1 / 5 stars January 25, 2012
an endless loop of misery
-ANIMATION/ART-
art work wasn't good. the person's anatomy was way off and the use of colors was horrifying. No shade it looks as if you made this in two hours. No actual animation just two repeating frames of piss.
-STORY-
No story at all, nothing to find good about this.
-AUDIO-
well at least you put a song. Not the greatest fitting song but I see what you're trying to accomplish with a dramatic song. Something you might put in mind that the song itself does not loop, you should look into that.
-ORIGINALITY-
I must say I have to give you points for originality. I don't think anyone else here has thought of a scene were a man pisses, looking at the sun while dramatic music is playing.
OVERALL
not one of my favorites I don't find this funny at all, and think you have way more to improve on before you ever touch flash again. But I guarantee if you work hard on it and practice more you will eventually be a top-notch animator.
just a brony