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Submitted: 07/31/2002 | 03:02PM EST
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Current Score: 3.19 / 5.00
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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This is my first film I made in flash. It's frame-by-frame and no sound whatsoever cause I'm new at this. I don't expect pity from most of you out there, so review how you feel. Enjoy.
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Average Score: 6.0 / 10
"Cool animation"
When it's done well (like it is in this one), frame by frame animation can look REAL good! It could have used a few various sound effects in various places too make a difference, but in any other case, this is simply a great short, which is pretty dang fun to watch! The only flaw I have to bitch about is the absence of a preloader, but it's still pretty well done!
"interesting."
actually it was hella good. my first flash animation was an arm holding a chainsaw, with a stick figure standing under it. the chainsaw rotated down (jerkily i might add) and when it hit the stickfigure's head it exploded in blood, then the word "next" appeared in the corner and another came on, and the same thing happened, then i added the same figure as before walking up soi could watch it on loop and it looked like there was a continuous line of people coming to be killed. i was so proud. you, obviously, are a world ahead of me. i tip my hat to you.
"not bad"
considering it's your first flash animation, i would say you did a pretty decent job. keep at it
"its okay...."
but it needs some actoin.do a remake.couler it,draw it a bit better.but it was actually pretty good,considering it was your first flash.
"Not bad...a little more next time..."
Just some advice...Put a little more flare in it! Refreshing Indeed!