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*REPLAY BUTTON HAS BEEN FIXED*
*BG MUSIC HAS BEEN LOWERED*
*SOUND QUALITY IS MESSED UP*

The 1st episode of EDTOT
Sorry to say im not very satisfied with this, and the ending was obviously rushed and I apologize for that.
But I did try to make this enjoyable and I hope you enjoy it as well, thank you for watching and look out for Ep. 2!

Check out the website!
http://edtot.webs.com/
Monster belongs to Lady gaga
I came to play belongs Downstait
Holiday and Know your enemy belong to Green Day

I dont own of that music, credit goes straight to them.

Reviews


BigxxBangBigxxBang

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars January 22, 2012

Not bad

The music is definitely a distraction more then a plus side. I think if you want music in this, aim for maybe an instrumental that fits the feel and doesn't overpower the rest of the video. Something as Green Day is a bit to unfitting for this comedyesque video, but good attempt.



gothicseagullgothicseagull

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 22, 2012

LOL!

Even with the iffy sound quality, I really enjoyed this film! Animation was good, and the humor was spot on! (Troll Tree) "What the fu-!" XD Fix the sound and it's a perfect score dude.



dragon3rockerdragon3rocker

Rated 2 / 5 stars January 22, 2012

has potential

the biggest issue i had was that having music playing all the time in the background was distracting and didnt have much to do with what was going on in the story. maybe use the music to emphasize the characters' emotions or the mood you want for the scene. also music with words while characters speak doesnt work


JaceLeo responds:

I could fix that and make it lower, would that solve the problem?
Im actually intending to put my own music in here rather than copyrighted stuff, I just have to get used to woking with FL studio


stevxstevx

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 22, 2012

nice

this has alot of potential, keep up the good work



MickyQueueMickyQueue

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars January 22, 2012

Meh.

Honestly the ending didn't feel rushed to me. No more than the rest of the movie, really. The biggest problem was the overzealous music. Sometimes I couldn't hear the dialogue and that's always a definite no-no.

Comedic timing was actually o-k. It suffered from mediocre jokes. Some research for a better sense of what most people find funny would make your movies a lot better.

The entire movie suffered from a general lack of cohesion. The movie is intended to begin a series and it should feel that way. The general plot of the series and a general feeling of what should be expected should be present. We need to be curious, and amused enough. Seemed to rely too heavily on silliness and anime tropes, not enough on genuinely entertaining situations.

The characters were also kind of cliche. Some research into how people really behave and how human dialogue really flows would do you a lot of good also.

You're probably already aware that you do not have the best animation skills yet so I won't go into that.

I don't want you to feel discouraged though, there's real potential here. The elements are lacking in a lot of ways but as long as you're not afraid of your own subject matter you could probably make it work.


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JaceLeo responds:

Thanks for that, if you mean the stereotypes as in cliche then that was actually intended. This series is supposed to be very random, also this first episode was mainly about introducing characters and what you'll usually expect from them later on.
And yeah I know about animation skills...XD