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Hello guys! This took 3 weeks to make and I really worked hard on it! I really improved a lot on my animation skills and I really want to thank Solrac (Yaplap) for voicing this with me!
Anyways I hope you guys enjoy this movie and please subscribe to my youtube channel for more upcoming animations!
Beginning song: Relaxing Music ( Instrumental Piano )
Ending/credits song: the flanger sound + sealife
Thanks for the reviews guys! I really appreciate it. :)
EDIT: Daily feature yes!!! I don't know how to tell you guys how happy I am!! Thank you everyone!
EDIT2: Front paged!! I've waited a whole year for this day and it has finally happened again, Thank you Tom!
That was freaking hilarious! This flash just made my day.
all in all it was a good animation, though i find the characters alittle...unpolished. But background music and everything else looked and sound great. I think you did a great job on this.
Thanks man, I really appreciate it :)
While this did have the potential to be comedy gold due to the current score it received. Unfortunately, the execution was really awkward and unbearable at times.
Graphics: Cooli, I'll admit that you did a good job on this with your usage of rendering, frame-by-frame, and tweening. Plus, you did a great job with the facial expressions. Therefore, this gets a passing grade in this department.
Sound: The music you chose was fitting though you didn't credit the creator, which just isn't right. Plus, you and Solrac also did a good job on the voicework. In other words, I have nothing to complain about this either.
Content: This is a bad case of an original idea ruined by a bad execution. All of the jokes in this felt forced and were very predictable. It doesn't help that this was drawn out, which exacerbated this. If you're going to do gay jokes and shock humor; study the likes of Bob Clampett, Tex Avery, the Fleischer brothers, John K, Retarded Animal Babies, and Rats on Cocaine. Of course, I'm also appreciative you doing something under five megs with actual effort, along with doing something original.
What I do like:
-Passable file size
-Good art and animation
-Good voice acting
What I didn't like:
-Every joke in this was forced and felt predictable, which makes this unfunny.
-Needlessly drawn out
-The ending didn't match the buildup.
Overall: I know you guys are going to get bent out of shape upon reading this. (And your fans will probably hate me for it as well.) However, I am going to be fair and give you a six for trying. Just keep at it and study the right material from now on.
Okay! Thanks for the review ;)
That was weird
Well, first the guy runs his son over the cliff and then they appear on the cliff? I guess I shouldn't try to make sense out of something comical like this. It actually looked like it was going to be something serious at first. I had no idea it was going to be about being gay. You should expect to see that on the Internet, of course. The music really set the mood off with how it was so pleasant while the humor was so dark.
That guy was so insane, I'm glad his pain lived on at the end. It seems like he was beating his son up and then fell off the cliff. This was a weird cartoon because the scenario was so mundane yet it got insane so quickly. I of course love it and the voices really show how funny it is. The animation, while not great, isn't bad.
Lol my humor is weird but thanks for the review :D
This is too bad.
It's clear you're a talented flash artist but it's really too bad you write such hateful stuff. I wish newgrounds users weren't so homophobic.
I'm not homophobic if I make a character that's homophobic. I actually know a lot of gay people. I just thought I'd make a story about this because its something new.
Thanks for the review :)
You're so cool, cooli :D
Thank you sir.
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
Meeting new people on the first day can be a real gamble.
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