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WARNING: This cartoon is very violent. VERY violent. If you are a little girl - best run away.
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Thanks for the reviews! I read every one. Still working on the sequel - I aim to finish it by the end of this year.
Okay, for a critique.
The animation is extremely uneven in quality. Some portions are well done. For instance, the landscape shots are nice. Your creative facials designs are also pretty interesting, but somewhat hit or miss (the guy on the horse, for instance, looked pretty terrible). Your detailing of the internal organs I consider a plus, as it really does at a lot of depth to your frames.
At first, I found the violence to be excessive, but as it carried on it seemed to get funnier and funnier. As, what I'm assuming is, a parody of over the top and indulgent violence, I thought this really hit home. Every over the top slaughtering seemed to get more ludicrously amusing. It's the slow-down the really makes it work, though. I feel that some people didn't take too well to the violence due to the score, but clearly it's an integral part of the humor here so nuts to them I guess.
Now, at some parts it just looks awful and I think that's what really hurts you the most. Even during some of the better segments, the whole thing feels like it was done in some MS paint universe. Whether it be intentional or not, it hurts the overall presentation. I'm just going to assume that, as someone who is clearly capable of drawing decently enough, you don't need to be told which portions look good or bad, so I'll leave it at that.
The humor was solid. Some parts were funnier than others. I loved the sniper. I bits with the kings. Found it funny how you used the same silent frame of prosnorkulus during all the dialogue.
Overall, I thought this was decent, but if you could increase your line quality. Make your animation more fluid. Add some visual flair. Have a bit more consistency in the quality and improve a few other details I think you'd have something awesome here.
I rated 10 because I think this deserves a better score, but my actual rating would be about an 8.
Fair enough my friendo, a good review indeed. Also, all the people who voted low because of the violence are in fact the little girls I mentioned.
Funny but... slow.
The jokes and stuff were funny, it's just the movie seems sooo slow, like conversations took a little too long to progress. Speed things up a bit more and I think it'd be quite a bit better, not to say it's bad at all now or anything though.
How very strange...
I do believe I like it!
idk what to say.
so i wont
a good start
i like the cartoon, it was very funny, kinda a been there done that idea(goremaster, korgoth) but the blunderbuss and other guns where a nice touch (when he shot the tiger in the head was classic, i laughed my ass off) only thing i didnt care for was the music, rap/electro/what ever dont match the cartoon at all, i suggest metal, or something barbaric.... like metal, all in all nice one
Thanks for the review, though I can't ignore the contradiction in telling me that Prosnorkulus is "a been there, done that idea (goremaster, korgoth)", and then telling me to use heavy metal music instead of the dubstep which adds to the very style which helps separate it from such cartoons.
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