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i flash animation i made as a thanks for the 1000 subscribers i reach in Youtube :)
Thanks to BlackLead and RicePirate for there voices :)
It was really funny when Swiper raped Dora until he died.
Uhh... Good effort?
as a matter of fact. not really. i didn put effort into this :CCCCCCCCCCCCCC
It felt empty and the jokes sucked.
To be honest, this wasn't funny at all.
The tweens were horribly done and they just looked so lifeless. I mean, you've been animating for a while now. Why give us something that a beginner dishes out. Try some more f-b-f practice or if you wanna try tweening, practice tweening in a way that does make it look lazy.
The voices were terrible. Now, I could care less about the accent as that doesn't bother me. The emoting could have, however been better than it was. Also, Ricepirate was slightly annoying in this movie. I'm not a big fan of his and to be honest his voice didn't go well with the animation.
Also, the idea was just nonsensical. Everything was just too random and out of place, like the yugioh joke.
Also, the music usage was also random. None of them fit the situation. For example, the Pokemon Ruby and Sapphire battle music wasn't needed for when Swiper goes insane.
Overall, you have a long way to go my friend. Tutorials and practice are a must here.
first of all: that was flash is a joke itself, in other words, i made this on purpose NOT like my normal animation style . normaly i dont do everything with tweens. im more Frame By Frame Friend.
i hate tweens myself. you should know More about me befor critic me about 1 animation.
Second: if you didn like voices! thats your problem! we dont share the same taste of audio. its better so , i mean if we were all the same, that would be boring as hell...
Third: that was just an idea came out of my head as i was in college. i actuarly was aware that i wont be funny. since your fools ALL have that disgutsting taste of humor of tapeworms in ass or bisual sexual rape or the best one COCK JOKES! pffff...
im not funny and im ok with it.
Fourth: thers a billion Musics in NG audio portal! its not easy to find the best ones without help so easy.and besides as i said in above. we all dont share the same taste of audio! like it .like it | dont like it. dont like it .
so overall: your critic is plain and effectless since this is not even my REAL style at all!
but on the turorial things...im allready ON on that
Damnit man... This looked like it was going to be so funny, especially looking at the preloader and the first 15 or so seconds... But from there it was all downhill. The graphics are an interesting mix of really well done and badly rushed, as is the animation. The fusion of the two was odd, but didn't affect the fact that the content was sorely lacking. The voice work was a major low point, as was the lack of a good ending due to a poor script.
it so on porpuse. if i wanted to do it in anime style i could do it. easy taske. but that would change the point of it. comprende?
The return of Dr. Bees!
Goling about and preventing things.
He was working in a whip shop in Flushing, Queens...
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