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This is a difficult flash to review, taking into consideration the plotline and the simple animation that was used to navigate the point across. I like the black-and-white animation style where the text is embedded into a movie clip and traced in the next frame, it really adds character to it as opposed to, say, something you wrote in Times New Roman or something that you still handwrote but didn't apply that effect to.
A really nice choice of music you chose there. Pretty odd how it stops when showing the box and a single frame showing "Lol" appears and ends. I guess it works if you're trying to comedically crash the pace, so that's fine.
Not too bad
I was actually somewhat touched by this, because it seemed like you really put your heart into it. Is this based on something that actually happened to you? If so, then I do feel sorry for you. There are always times where our families get into fights and we want to leave. It's something I can certainly associate myself with. I suppose we all have our special place where we want to become secluded, but realize we can't stay there forever.
I thought it was pretty cool how you put a lot of variety of the speed of things going on in the background. I am actually referring to the Newgrounds logo and nothing in the actual cartoon. I know that might sound kind of insulting, but it's still something to take note of. You could probably do better with the animation, as it isn't well defined. I hope everything works out for you.
today is MY b--day too!!!!!!!!!!!
and someone just sang to me :)
A short film about a park bench
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