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The last of the three pilot episodes, with hopefully more on the way.
I wanted to change it up this time and have Doggy do something during the review. Probably won't do is again, maybe just have him stay in a set location.
My personal opinion on Adventure Time: it can be pretty fun to watch sometimes, but more often than not I find it either boring, or a little too bizarre.
THANKS FOR THE DAILY FEATURE!
It has great room for improvement
Let's bring out some obvious points that we see from the flash: decent animation, solid voice acting and a perfect mark on what you were trying to give us the viewer to see. I didn't find the humor that uplifting, cause it gave us "already out there" opinions that are too obvious, and by giving us things that we already are aware of makes me think that you didn't put that much effort in writing your story.
The only "problem" I find is the writing, it seems lazy and it shows that it could have been written hastily, but despite this, the series shines with potential. With more effort put into it, you got yourself one hell of a flash animation.
Well, the cartoon is unscripted and completely ab-libbed, but thanks for the critique anyway.
People maybe disliking this just because they are Adventure Time Fans, but me being one myself I completely understand why you hate it. About half the show is yelling and the plot is very vague, but that's just what kids watch these days, check out how random Family Guy is or South Park, both are very good shows but have their flaws. But great animation by the way, you should try making another one on how stupid movies are these days, but make your episodes longer.
I really like the animation, it's creative, funny, origional(-ish), and clearly portrays your opinions. Though I myself DO enjoy this show, I have to give you a nine out of te, for making me laugh, good job!
Decent visuals, and interesting concept. I liked how his design looked like something out of 1920's Hollywood. But why the hell did he start talking about video games if he's supposed to be an old fart? That really broke the whole thing.
Didn't like it at all
The animation is good, but I can't find the funny part of your cartoon. It was just a little dog hating adventure time. I'm a fan of the show, but this is not the reason why I dislike this; your character just makes a weird review, with no clear points, and just saying that the show sucks because it's different. Serioulsy, there's no hating here, I just say that Adventure Time is a lot funnier than this animation.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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