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Hey guys! This is my first flash short I've done in almost a year.
This is kind of based on a true story.
Thanks to Noah "Lefthandsock" Scammon for the additional voices.
Note: Subtitles are in here because on youtube, I had a lot of people say they had a hard time understanding me.
EDIT: Wow, thank you for the front page! :)
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The male voice was balanced, but the female voice had too much treble to bass and was piercing to the ears. Also the animation could have ran smoother but it is pretty clear that despite your inexperience you did rather well.
I don't really "get" this. Making it short was probably a good idea. What "thinness" was the belt referring to? I did appreciate the animation in this. I was afraid it was going to get really sexual. I should have known it wouldn't be too bad what with the way it didn't have an "A" rating.
While just one joke, it worked okay for itself. I like her expression at the end. It gives you the feeling of goofiness. Seeing as how the cartoon started off serious, it needed that. Then again, I liked that same weight gag.
-Good timing with it all, etc
-Chick's voicing had crap quality (I'm ignoring this point though)
-Personally, didn't find the joke so funny
I'm giving you a 6/10 though for the effort.
The animation was welly done, The voice acting was alright, not much to go off up i think 10 words where spoken. The joke was lame, if your going to go for the panty votes, next time don't do boy shorts there just not that sexy.
really short. but not really front page worthy but still good.
Not the best, but it was okay. The animation wasn't very great, and the voices were pretty cool.
What to expect when you're expecting (an acceptance letter)
Some magic frog BEATS!
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