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First Time in a non perverted way thank you very much!
[...] and "cute" isn't an adjective I use frequently. :)
I liked the video. Aside from the cuteness, this has reminded me of my first love and all - and that is a very nice thing, you know? When we listen to a song or see a video that reminds us of something; makes us think, that means that song or video is really speaking to us.
If this is indeed your first creation, congrats, you're doing fine.
THe animation is good, but there is no fluidity.
At some parts the flash becomes a face, and nothing more. If you plan on doing something else there. Maybe a whole head, but just something more than what you put. Since this is your first animation, I would say it is pretty good! At the end you might want to put some sort of credits instead of having it loop. Animation is hard work, and takes time. It seems that you rushed this, because there aren't enough frames to make the flash fluid. Also, adding a transition before jumping to another scene. The empty scenes would be fine if you mad some sort of transition, such as have the scene zoom into a cloud, have the cloud speak, then going back down to the people. Overall a decent flash.
-1 for fluidity
-2 for empty scenes and no transition between them.
3.5/5 7/10(Since 3.5 rounds up to four, I'm puting in four);)
not bad at all
My only suggestions would be to take advantage of shape and motion tweens in flash, other than that, not bad at all
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