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After leaving Lea Dsei, The Fear, Scih and Demil arrive at a little island where the Temple of Valor is located.

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Chapter two of my award winning visual novel 416. If you haven't played the first one, you can play it here:
http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/584555

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THIS IS A VISUAL NOVEL: THAT MEANS ALMOST NO PLAYABILITY AND ONLY READING. IF YOU DON'T LIKE VISUAL NOVELS CLOSE THIS NOW (or play this one, maybe you like it!)****
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Things you should remember from chapter 1 (without spoilers!):
-A sentium is a living feeling, like the Fear.
-Lea Dsei was the big fortress of the swamp, the only one that stood against the spiders.
-Scih is a mortal, Demil is an astral guide (the ones who take the souls to the other side).
-Lieutenant Keegan was in charge of protecting the fortress, and went to battle with Asarot.
-Asarot was the big spider who was threatening them.

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I'm sorry for the delay (this was supposed to be released on december 31), but the translator quit the day of the release without having translated anything, so I had to do everything myself.

Thank's for playing (or reading, or whatever)! This chapter is a little shorter than the first one (about 20 sentences less).

On chapter 3 begins the real deal (31/1/2012)!

Reviews


SebagarySebagary

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 4, 2012

Genial.

Hola, sí, soy el único que te viene a publicar en español porque tengo aguante. Me encantó la segunda parte, está muy buena y quiero ya la tercera jajaja.


Nittram responds:

Oh! Tenés cuenta, jajaja, gracias!!!

La tercera va a ser una de las mejores, y a partir de ahí la trama se pone en serio. ¡Gracias de nuevo!


TTay21TTay21

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 2, 2012

Good Work!

You sped the text up! Nice!
And the music is good as usual.
A good visual novel.


Nittram responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!


tkdKickChicktkdKickChick

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 2, 2012

Awesome!!!

The second chapter was every bit as good as the first! The music and graphics are great. I like that I can speed up the text by clicking, and also go back if I missed something or was confused. Thanks for including the background info on the characters, so I didn't have to go back to re-read chapter 1. One thing I noticed is that the "416" logo covered almost all of the credits, except the * at the bottom. There's no need to apologise for the English, there were only a few mistakes, nothing that took away from my enjoyment at all. The only thing that confused me was the occasional change in point of view, from one character to the next. Perhaps you could use a different color font for each character, so if you introduce a new character but don't want to reveal the name yet, we can still tell it's someone different speaking. Overall, though, this was very enjoyable, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.


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Nittram responds:

Haha! Thanks a lot! Yeah, I added the background info because I forgot to put that on the game. Next chapters will start with "In previous chapters of 416..."

Lots of thanks for telling me about the credits, I'm fixing that now.

Also, there aren't any more changes in point of view in the plot. At least for a long time, but thanks anyway for the ideas!

I'm working hard on chapter 3 to make one of the best ones. Why? Because my personal favorite, and one of the main characters of the saga, will be introduced there.

Thanks again!