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[EDIT] OH MY GOD! i cant believe i got the front page! thank you guys for liking my stuff and thank whoever said "hey, lets put this thing on the front page" i feel loved :3

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i did it! i told my self that i had to finish this before the year ended...

here is the next episode of "Stickman Can't Fight" i devoted much time in improving the visuals and the backgrounds. this episode might be lacking a bit in the "action" department, but the three episode arc is really gonna blow your face off! :D or at least that's the goal

like always, please tell me what i could improve on. what you liked and what you didnt like. constructive critiques are waaaayy better than just "good job" ;)

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sonicrider2012sonicrider2012

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 30, 2012

well, his elmenent is : *fart*
and that is so groos BUT in another way it is too funny.
and you should change your technique in animating like you add more art like eyes and hair not in the draws but in the whole flash.


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guitan11 responds:

drawing more artsy takes a long time. specially when its moving. i try to incorporate as much as i can :3


darkmanx13darkmanx13

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 19, 2012

Totally expected 1000 years of pain technique!


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guitan11 responds:

that is just gross >.>


Clarrence321Clarrence321

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 18, 2012

The fart is strong with this one.
Ahahaha nice movie dude! I am still waiting for the part 6 wish you can finish it in december. =3 oh yeah because you were my inspiration I think I'll add your black stickman to my stick animation =D Hoooza!~


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guitan11 responds:

go for it bro! it would be cool to see Black from another person's perspective :P


LazicfulLazicful

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 14, 2012

Is farting his ability? :D


guitan11 responds:

i will not disclose any information


6th-sage6th-sage

Rated 4 / 5 stars May 13, 2012

This is very original, in terms of stick series. I like how you incorporated comedy with action into this series and took a very unique turn that very few others have done on newgrounds. That being said, I can't help but wonder if Kung Fu Panda or Karate Kid gave you any inspiration. Oh well. Most newgrounds movies are created upon inspiration of another work, and those works by previous works and so forth. I'd guess Kung Fu Panda as Po's so-called "fat" and "soft" style corresponds to this stick's "fart" style. But again as it's pure speculation, I can't be sure, so that's why I'm asking.

So we all know that his finishing move is the so-called "fart". Element-wise it is technically air. It can also be applied as biochemical weapon, which fits the "weapons" category. And Being able to emit a large amount of toxins and store a large amount of metabolized gas as well as release is in a deadly form is an ability of sorts. Which is fun in terms of comedy. Definitely original.

What I think you could improve on:

Well, for the first thing, I would hire voice actors. Voices can definitely add a lot to the dramatic effects and could jerk us awake when we're bored. And there are times in the videos when we do get bored.

For example, although your series did take a unique turn, it does what every cartoon on television, parody: make a dramatic badass entrance for the protagonist and then muck it up by making him fail at every trial. It's gimmicky. It's corny. It's overly played. It's been done over and over and over that when I saw the trials, I KNEW it was going to be him failing at every single one and yes, I knew it was going to be a fart as I can related it to a previous episode. If you can predict it, it's BORING and you should take some twists.

For example, the "Larry" series could be looked at if you haven't already. Although there are a lot of gimmicky references and recurrences that do make me sick, there are parts that are hilarious, like in episode 2 where Larry slaps his dog with a stick and accidentally chops his foot off and he runs to stimulation of alcohol. THAT is unique. Because I did NOT predict that and even if I did have a feeling, it still made me laugh so hard. Your series 4 did not, really. I predicted what was going to happen in every scene. So I suggest you can add some twists, something no one can predict. Even one per episode could be good.

Your silly facial expressions is a good twist. That's a start. Which is why I actually think voice acting could help to the comedic effects. You could make some more good work on that.

You can also add humor to the "epic/strong" characters like Red and Pink. Let them have silly habits. Let them have secrets or something silly that no one could predict. You could take a turn at poking fun at them. Let them mess up, too when you expect them to win.

So in essence, make the series more unpredictable. That's the good and bad of the series in a single sentence - it is original in theory and unique, but has too many overplayed elements. Add some more twists. Whenever you create a new scene, ask yourself, "Is the audience going to predict that?" And if you watch it and think you know what's going to happen even if you're the artist, throw it out and rewrite.

All epic series eventually fall because of they run of out ideas. Keep the series fresh with new twists and angles and throw things in our direction that completely blow our mind. If you think of immediately, it most likely has been done a million times. And when you think even more outside of the box, and give your next episode that element of twist beyond the normal twist, I can safely say then I'll give you the full 5 stars.

Best of luck and wishes! Looking forward to the next Stickman Can't Fight episode.


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guitan11 responds:

awesome review! have you seen the next episode? i think i covered some of the things that you wrote about. this series is growing with each new episode, and so am i. so i really enjoy detailed reviews like this one that tell me what other people see in my work. so thank you very much! :D