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This is my first flash video :D. It was made for a class project, I hope you guys enjoy it! Be gentle :P
Lack of movement, and effects.
You need to improve more on the movements, and the effects, also start working at 20fps or 24fps.
Confusing, but pretty good for a first.
It has all the elements of a good flash, And I think this is a good starting one.
So good :D
Actually, that was good.
Why can't all 'first' flashes be like this? This is what they're supposed to be like. :)
Story and plot...check.
Music and/or sound...check.
While, I don't think it'll ever be in the top 50, it's still an enjoyable flash. :)
Going back, one last time...
Detective Nwar untangles a massive copycat kidnapping conspiracy.
Joel runs out of shivs. Surley Ellie is not carrying anything that'll help him
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