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demo of my first game in flash
Not even finished enough to be a demo
I would like to say that this game would be great when its finished, And this demo isn't that bad, But I also have to agree with Exedor. Newgrounds isn't ment for test levels of this size. If it was 2 or 3 levels and a bit more complete, Then I could justify giving you more then a single star.
I'm going to give you one star, And I hope that next time you upload something of a "test" or "demo" that it is longer and has more features to it.
With Love: Violet
PS: Don't get me wrong, I really like that you're checking the community for feedback before progressing but, This is VERY early.
Don't submit tests.
This wasn't bad. Feel free to continue with your project.
But don't submit tests. This isn't Testgrounds. This is one enemy, 1 level, 1 1/2 screens long, with no end and no music. If it passes, what then? We'll be stuck with a pointless fragment of a game floating around here forever.
It's good, but please don't submit tests.
Not bad but..
The game it's self is good, despite being too easy but the reason i 'blammed' it was because it's not the complete game. Use this review to help you improve the final game and then re-submit!
The graphics are really good, keep to that style but make it abit more harder and please show people the controls. It took me awhile to finally find out it was the spacebar button to fight back.
Sorry for the blam, but when the keep is finished, then i'll review this game properly. Good luck!
An interactive story of love and adventure
Turn-based PvP Arena Battler
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