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Dec 25, 2011 | 1:15 PM EST
  • Daily Feature December 26, 2011

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Author Comments

I tried to have this done for Christmas last year, but was about a month late to submit it with any relevance. Sorry to all the voice actors I've kept waiting for a year, and thanks again for all the help!

Merry Godmas!

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StaadsyStaadsy

Rated 3 / 5 stars December 26, 2011

Well

The thing about this animation is that it's overall fairly good, and I probably would have given it a nine if it were not for the fact that it looks like a cheap version of one of JohnnyUtah's animations. Your animation, humour, and style overall seems to be a bad version of JohnnyUtah's. If you are trying to base your animation style on his, I'd give you one thing, change up some things and don't try to copy, just create your own, take hold of your own personal style. One thing I would really like to see is better character shading and better lip syncing, those are the things you should work on right now. 6/10 Take hold of your own style and don't just create a badly photocopied version of somebody else's style, you have much potential, so work hard on shading, your own style and lip syncing, which I know all of those are hard, but they are needed right now for you to truly take hold of your true potential -Staadsy



JazLyteJazLyte

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 26, 2011

Could have been really funny at half the length.

Why was that so long? You really fucked up a lot of your comedic timing by having it go so slow, I think this cartoon could have been really funny with about half of the banter taken out of it. The idea was really funny and the graphics, though lazy on the animation side, were easy on the eyes. But the first scenes, the scene with the cops with the Johnny Utah voice, the friend making the snowman, were really unfunny and threw the cartoon off balance. Others could have been shortened, because the awkwardness wasn't well-handled, but other than that everything else worked. Trim the fat and you have some great toonage here, velociraptors never fail to be fucking hilarious to me.


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StomachBugStomachBug

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars December 26, 2011

Overall it was alright

The style is crisp and your animation is ok, could have been a bit livelier. The humour was also a bit flat, the plot got dragged out for far too long. I must admit I was gonna turn it off after the first scene but my curiosity got the better of me. Im just saying you probably could have hit home if you made it shorter, it would have made the humour punchier. Keep it up though :)


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gumsgums

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 26, 2011

Nice

Was Nice but the dialogue needed a quicker pace I thought! otherwise nice on the animation


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KorpgKorpg

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 25, 2011

This is good

Not exactly the greatest Christmas flash, but one which is better than the Disney crap that is on the boob-toob all day.


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