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I tried to have this done for Christmas last year, but was about a month late to submit it with any relevance. Sorry to all the voice actors I've kept waiting for a year, and thanks again for all the help!
This is good
Not exactly the greatest Christmas flash, but one which is better than the Disney crap that is on the boob-toob all day.
That was pretty cool
I think the strongest point here is probably how good the animation is. It's great to see a Christmas submission on well, Christmas. I hope you, well, had a merry Christmas as it's probably mostly over for you. It's especially cool because I really wasn't expecting that ending, like the characters thought I was. Of course, that might have been because I wasn't really paying that much attention. It's still great to see such great artwork with such silly characters.
I knew from this title I was in for a wild ride. I had little idea what was going to happen, because it was pretty crazy from the get go. I think the funniest part was probably when the two elves talked about how they just sat around and did cool stuff. That's all you would have to do in order to be cool. I love the blue loading button.
It was a good as far as the art and animation went, but I found the humor to be flat. It seemed obvious from the beginning that it was the velociraptor and that little tidbit made santa go from the only one who seems to have a decent head on his shoulders into an idiot with anger issues.
Apart from the main plot, which as I mentioned was way too obvious, the side stories like the two detectives who think they are awesome, the protagonist and another elf discussing his obsession with the murder of the reindeers, and even the misled accusation of the snowman were all slow and dull. I see how they could have been funny, but there was far too much filler.
With all that aside, I love your characters and art, you have a talent with that. Perhaps you should find someone who is good with writing comedy scripts and collaborate? I know thats the only way I improve, through working with others.
Ha, yea ofcourse the snowman did it :) Very funny and nicely done, Merry christmas to you Al and those content little 'slaves'
Great story and awsome animation
It's nice to see another submission from you. It's been too long!
A short film about a park bench
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