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Hey, this is probably a bit late after the release of the game, but I might as well release it.
PS. I KNOW THAT HE ISN'T WEARING A FREAKING IRON HELMET! Don't bother commenting on it.
Merry Christmas, BEE TEE DUBS. :D
In short: ... Sure.
That wasn't all that bad.
Great compliment, I know. Sorry, I'm terrible at them. Let me try again:
That didn't suck.
Well, regardless... I actually did laugh at this. Well... Not laugh. More like chuckle. I chuckled at your animation. I chuckled at the premise. But what I did no chuckle over was your voice acting.
You sir, do not have a finely tuned voice for acting as multiple characters. At least... not yet. It's far too obvious you V/Acted for all characters, which takes away from the "realism"/"believeablility" (haha I know ironic or whatever) of this flash. There is an entire forum dedicated to finding voice actors for your flashes. I highly suggest you go there.
Also: Just give him the fucking iron helmet. It's like the trademark symbol of Skyrim right now, and people respond to that kind of shit. Hint: The general public is fucking stupid and anything you can do to help take the stress of their little brains understanding what they're looking at on the screen will be appreciated by their minds' subconscious.
I can almost honestly 100% say you could have gotten many more ratings and possibly "Today's Best" if you had only put on the stupid fucking helmet.
Well, I appreciate the honesty, and the time you invested in writing something thoughtful. And truthfully, yours is some of the best feedback I've gotten for a video in my experience with newgrounds. :)
My only retort, i suppose, is that a fairly large number of those I find and pm from that forum either say that they're already busy with a project, or never respond again once they agree and I give them a script. If you know any good voice actors who are willing to collaborate with a noob like me, or have a few tips on how to become a better one myself, I'm definitely willing to listen.
This is very funny!
Haha that's the first thing I did when that guard approached me.
"You need to stop that... shouting, it's scaring the people."
"Sorry, it won't happen again."
*Guard turns back*
That, and the whole chicken thing. I swear they put that stupid thing there on purpose.
iron helmet goes where?
i was expexting ponies because of the "my little"
voice acting could be improved, other than that it was good enough for me
Yeah. To be honest, it probably would've been a lot funnier had I thrown in a couple ponies...
Good Style of Comedy, animation needs to be more flowing however, \i think the faces were done well and time has been spent into making this
cool, thanks for the feedback. And yeah, I have noticed that the animation quality isn't very fluid. It's a problem I've been working on for a while. I'll just have to keep working at it. :)
it was better and short.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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