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I thought for a long time about something good to make my girlfriend for christmas, and I decided to make this. She loves bears and dancing and stuff so yeah :P
I decided to make this one entirely family friendly and appropriate for all ages, just because it's christmas and being vulgar didn't seem to be in the spirit.
I actually worked pretty damn hard on this, so yeah. Constructive criticism is appreciated :)
Merry Christmas, everyone :)
Really great job. It is rare to see such a serious tone in Newgrounds get executed so well. The poem and animation worked beautifully together... and I found the story/theme to be very heart-warming.
I hope you the best with your lady friend! Keep up the good flash work!
SO CUTE! Congratulations for finding that special someone.
Love it very much:)
I loved it:))
I think story is very interesting and romantic:)))
I liked the animation too:) I think it's cute:D
Be happy with you girlfriend:D It is great to have someone by you side:)))
Greatness and have a merry christmas!
Awesome! But a 9/10 because you couldn't rhyme enough, but of course I'm speaking in bluff! And I hope you two will make it in time.And hopefully I can stop speaking in rhymes!
First let's start with the basics. The artwork and animation are great, nothing spectacular, but simple, it seems a bit messy from time to time, but overall everything came through alright. The music was a good choice, but it got tiring overtime and fast. The voice acting from you as the narrator was nice sweet and warm, I loved it. The story, what can I say, going through this entire thing in rhyme must not have been easy, I like the joke at the end where you couldn't find a rhyme and both bears just walk off screen. All in all this was a good Christmas animation and a new one on Newgrounds that I adore.
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A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
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