Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
The title states it all!
Updated the audio.. thanks you critics and I aim to make this better.
Stay tuned for the others similar to this.
I Couldn't understand any word they said. The animation looks good, you could also add more poses if you wanted. The style reminds me to Bill Plympton cartoons.
Hey Bill was a great comic artist and animator, I 'll get there soon enough, he does have a head start though. Thanks for your host comment.
I like the animation, but could barely understand what was said
Hmm no worries, I know what I need to tweak now thanks.
Very funny!!! excellent animation!!!
Thanks hmm where is the criticism. It's not Newgrounds without the criticism. Just part of the nature and that is why it is great to post here.
if there was ever one thing that really turned me off in a lot of animations on Newgrounds, it was audio quality. i had an extremely hard time making out what the characters were saying, and this definitely looked like it would of been a winner christmas short or something, but you either should re-record vocals, or at least turn up the audio quality post-production. it really ruined what would of been a good animation.
@voltage, sorry dude I will resolve that issue and aim to make this a great parody.
nice style and animation, but i couldnt understand a word. you should just try to keep this a silent movie with effects and make the animations more clear, or get someone to voice act. otherwise good job :)
@waterflame thanks for the criticism I will work on that.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
devoted to the ambulative pleasure
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.