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Dec 13, 2011 | 4:43 AM EST

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The aim for the animation was to produce a 20 second animation promoting equality and diversity. For my promotion of e+d I used the idea of music and had two binary opposite characters; a chav (hoodie, whatever) and a rocker (or whatever you wanna call him). I know it's not the greatest but feedback would be nice, thanks!

Enjoy ;D

Reviews


GlaciusTSGlaciusTS

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 11, 2012

Not bad

The animation is actually pretty good, keep practicing and you could gain some real popularity. My only criticism... I think you should find an audio guy until your skill with audio improves, as was said previously, the characters are a little hard to hear and some of the sound effects were overly loud.

You show a lot of promise though. So I'll give you an 8/10. :)

Keep practicing and you'll do great. Spend more time with flash and watch some of the tutorials from the pros. There is a lot to learn there.

PS: A few years ago I offered to do voice over work for you. Is the project still being worked on? Did you ever find a place for me?


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iloveicelollies responds:

Yeah, it's still going, just very slowly. I'm a part-time game dev at the moment so I've been a bit busy! ^^


Duodenum88Duodenum88

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 13, 2011

Good, but needs a little help.

The animation wasn't bad, and idea behind this was rather interesting. It wasn't choppy or unwatchable. However, the voices needed to be louder. You can hardly hear what the guys are saying under the music, and it really threw off the audio balance.


iloveicelollies responds:

Yeah, I know what you mean. I just suck at voice acting :) When I was recording this I was in a really quiet room full of people so you can imagine how awkward it was to do xD


thenewmidishrinethenewmidishrine

Rated 0 / 5 stars December 13, 2011

My review

First: I have no idea what the left guy is saying this song is ???

Second: Equality and Diversity is something that nobody on newgrounds cares about

Third: Next time make a flash more worth viewing
Like for example stick men beating the crap out of each other

Now this is purely on opinion and you can bash me all day long


iloveicelollies responds:

I understand where you're coming from, you don't have to be a dick about it though.