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Yes, I understand the animation's not that good, I'm still new. Any constructive criticism on improving would be great! Also, this is NOT to be taken seriously, it's a comedy.
ITS SUPER FUNNY.
WHY DONT YOU MAKE A 3RD AND 4TH EPISODE?
it's a first edition, the voices are good,
I can excuse your lack of animation since I've seen your work since, and you are doing alright. however I wonder why you didn't make a second mortal dumbass
I am, its taking time because one of the VAs never got the lines in yet so I'm waiting before I start.
Fun to Watch!
Yeah, yeah, animation is not the best, but for a first movie, I honestly don't see anything too bad about it. I was laughing throughout a lot of it. The script is very well-written, and just listen to JustShawn's review down there, he's right. The script is definitely the best part. Voice-acting was pretty good in some areas, not so great in others, in fact I now see that I didn't do very well with my acting, and I could've done much better.
Your on your way to making a successful comedic-parody series. You have what it takes. You just need a little more practice, which is understandable.
Actually, funny but poorly animated.
Title says all, lots of comic relief in this one, just ignore the animations and listen to the script. Its pretty funny.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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