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Echo Force Zero: Vol1

**Thanks for Daily First and FP !! CHEERS **

**also, if you don't like anime-inspired stuff or character archetypes, you probably wont care much for this've been warned**

Well, i am Very happy to be getting this thing up! I worked very hard on this and am very happy with the results - - I have decided to classify it as an "Adventure Drama" as far as genre so keep that in mind
i want to thank all the incredible voice actors who really helped me bring this thing to life. and thanks to monoflauta for helping me code it all together

**Don't forget to find the hidden Scene! There will be one in each episode and it will be adding extra canon plot points - -HINT -- you dont have to click anywhere**

Check it out on youtube here: tch?v=HD5YKEEQlPs
Later guys!



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

This was a great effort!

I agree 100% with everything Xesolor said.
I couldn't stand the dialogue.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

gread but not best :(

you only get 7/10 kus i wanted to see som kind of fight in this ep
your not best and its not so good vois acting i would like to see som more action n the later eps
ether way NICE JOB :D


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

potential etc

First of all, don't be discouraged by negative feedback. If you continue being ambitious with this show you can only grow.

It's a bit of a shame that you had so much stuff explained and so many characters introduced in the first episode. You seem to have a pretty well-developed story in your head and maybe it would've been better to feed it to the audience step by step, like focusing on one or two characters in the first episode. It would be much more interesting if you explained the world over the course of a few episodes instead of basically saying "There is this and that, and there are some people there there and there."
I won't mention anything about character archtypes because characters can develop while the story progresses.

With that being said, I'm waiting for more.

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Z atchi?

You mind want to look out for other animes with names like that.
Take a glance at Zatch Bell if you ever wanna make money on this idea.
Also, the two boys' trainer looks kind of like Snow from Final Fantasy XIII.
Other than that, this is a good idea. Bad guys are really well designed, adult characters are collected and everything. A good, generic start for an anime-like cartoon.

LewToons responds:

well obviously i can watch every anime and play every video to make sure of those things haha - - i just make what think looks cool and i make what i think sounds cool for names. YUP


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Please don't call me a hater!

I just think that this, although obviously the product off lots of hard work, is really lame, for a number of reasons.

Firstly, ALL of the characters are cliches. And not in the good way, like Girlchan in Paradise. Every time I was introduced to a new one, I either cringed or laughed. They're just very shallow and unrealistic.

Secondly although the main storyline is very cool and full of potential, the way you used it was unoriginal. I felt as if I'd heard all the lines before, and bits that should have been funny (meeting Zatchi) or cool (Tangle and the tyrant visit the villagers) just weren't because of boring lines. Lots of bits didn't make any sense, like the fight in Direstorm mentioned earlier, and the way he personally visited those villagers to kill them for no good reason. Why didn't he just take them as slaves? They were perfectly willing to help him. The voice acting wasn't bad, but I don't feel that the characters were represented realistically. The storyline of it was so childish.

Finally, if you're going to do an anime, do an anime. I'm not talking about the art style so much (although that could have been improved, they looked like western style drawings with manga style bits shoved in) It was more the way it copied every anime technique, but just didn't get it right. There was none of the flow you get in anime, and the scenes alternating between the three planets were unexpected, it felt as if they were there simply so you could use that technique.

This is one of those things I see on Newgrounds that has so obviously had so much love and effort put into it, but just didn't get it right. And that makes me sad because I can see the potential in it.

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LewToons responds:

well, bummer that it wasnt your thing - - guess i wont be seein' ya on the next one!

thanks for checkin it out though