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Nov 26, 2011 | 10:53 PM EST
  • Daily 5th Place November 28, 2011

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The world is about to be destroyed. Demil Da'Monisch, an astral guide in charge of taking souls to the Other Side, and Scih Ciresta, a girl that has nothing to do with the dead ones, will go on an adventure to discover what is happening.

****THIS IS A VISUAL NOVEL: THAT MEANS ALMOST NO PLAYABILITY AND ONLY READING. IF YOU DON'T LIKE VISUAL NOVELS CLOSE THIS NOW (or play this one, maybe you like it!)****

My first real game... or whatever.

This is a story I've been working on for a long time now. I hope you like it!
It's the first chapter only. If it's succesful enough, I will release the rest.

This chapter is long, less than an hour but a bit long.

Thank's for playing (or reading, or whatever)!

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EDIT

EDIT (28-nov): Next chapter will be released on December 31. You can get more information about releases and things related to my games following me on twitter (@inkainis).

(Daily 5th place!! Thanks a lot!!)

Thank You!

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Things I'll add to the engine on chapter 2:
-Increase the speed of the text.
-Use of spacebar for passing the text, aswell as the mouse.
-Revised translation (although I think this one is fine).

Thanks for giving ideas!

Reviews


cobcriscobcris

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Grande Nittram!!

Uff, al fin puedo escribir tranquilo por acá xD. Increíble chep. Felicitaciones. Esas referencias a temas existenciales como la muerte, el depredador y las presas, viajes astrales, apocalípsis universal. Jajaj. Quedó joya. ¡Buenísima la música ! El tema hecho todo con whistle está de lujo. Casualidades extrañas del universo:
1. Jajaj en el momento del salto interdimensional miré el reloj y eran las 4:16 :O :O
2. Como la hora que ponés en el reloj de mi juego ( jajajaj ). En mi juego, para pasar al otro plano en el primer nivel. Re loco.
Hey y felicitaciones de nuevo, muy muy muy bueno. Grande Nittram
Estoy esperando el capítulo 2. Buenas fechas, jajaj. Es demencial ésto. Jajajja
Saludos!


Nittram responds:

¡¡Gracias!! En serio, no esperaba que alguien fuese a comentar en español, debe ser una casualidad extraña del unvierso, jaja.

¡¡Muchas gracias por comentar y por jugar o leer o lo que sea!!


tkdKickChicktkdKickChick

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Awesome!!!

The story itself is great, and I like the writing style you used. A few spelling/grammar issues (in the English version), but not nearly enough to affect the readability. The graphics were very well done, I like the way characters move a bit as they "talk." Because I am a fast reader, normally, the slow scrolling speed would frustrate me, but I was so interested in the different characters and backgrounds that I didn't mind in the least. The music really added extra depth, because it changed right along with the story, really making it a full experience. I can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm really interested in finding out what makes the girl so special, why she could see you. Keep it up!


Nittram responds:

Oh, yeah! Future chapters will allow you to just click and make the text appear at once.

Thanks a lot for playing and reviewing. You'll not be dissapointed about Scih!


DanielDingDanielDing

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Demil & Scih was introduced on this first 416. Her cat died, somehow the spell that Demil chanted did not work, it has done alternation. i love the first chapter of this series.



Dank818Dank818

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Im Not A reader But

I read THIS WHOLE thing!!
NICE WORK!!


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Nittram responds:

Thank you!


NealousNealous

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Having had two years of Latin for high school, our plane is terrestrial, not terennial (Terra means earth or dirt), as opposed to astral, from astra meaning star. at any rate, the only thing I thought was wrong with the story was Keegan didn't get enough screen time, but as the start of the story some slack is