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Nov 26, 2011 | 10:53 PM EST
  • Daily 5th Place November 28, 2011

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The world is about to be destroyed. Demil Da'Monisch, an astral guide in charge of taking souls to the Other Side, and Scih Ciresta, a girl that has nothing to do with the dead ones, will go on an adventure to discover what is happening.

****THIS IS A VISUAL NOVEL: THAT MEANS ALMOST NO PLAYABILITY AND ONLY READING. IF YOU DON'T LIKE VISUAL NOVELS CLOSE THIS NOW (or play this one, maybe you like it!)****

My first real game... or whatever.

This is a story I've been working on for a long time now. I hope you like it!
It's the first chapter only. If it's succesful enough, I will release the rest.

This chapter is long, less than an hour but a bit long.

Thank's for playing (or reading, or whatever)!

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EDIT

EDIT (28-nov): Next chapter will be released on December 31. You can get more information about releases and things related to my games following me on twitter (@inkainis).

(Daily 5th place!! Thanks a lot!!)

Thank You!

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Things I'll add to the engine on chapter 2:
-Increase the speed of the text.
-Use of spacebar for passing the text, aswell as the mouse.
-Revised translation (although I think this one is fine).

Thanks for giving ideas!

Reviews


DanielDingDanielDing

Rated 5 / 5 stars December 2, 2013

Demil & Scih was introduced on this first 416. Her cat died, somehow the spell that Demil chanted did not work, it has done alternation. i love the first chapter of this series.



NealousNealous

Rated 5 / 5 stars July 25, 2013

Having had two years of Latin for high school, our plane is terrestrial, not terennial (Terra means earth or dirt), as opposed to astral, from astra meaning star. at any rate, the only thing I thought was wrong with the story was Keegan didn't get enough screen time, but as the start of the story some slack is



bud3rbud3r

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 9, 2012

I really like it ^-^ the english version might need some editing but other than that I loved everything. Also how did you come up with names? Ive tried writing and I always come up with really stupid names.


Nittram responds:

Most are real names or mixing of other names xD


TTay21TTay21

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 11, 2011

Great game

You already know about the slow-ness of text, and the music was awesome! I really enjoyed this game. I think that saying the name of the characters before they speak would be good too. I got confused a bit. But, other than those two flaws, great game!


Nittram responds:

Haha, thank you! The second chapter will be released in about 19 days and I've already corrected the text speed in there.

But I cannot change the story... Anyway, you already now almost all characters for chapter 2, and those you do not, are introduced almost instantly.

Thank you!


emoshiemoshi

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 28, 2011

rather liked it

it was a pretty good story, the music added a good touch to it, while the graphics were alright, some of the characters could have been drawn a little bit better. But it was well made up for with the story itself. And i didn't mind that the translate to english wasn't perfect, i could still read it. Another small flaw I found was the test speed, I read the text and had to wait a little bit before I could read on. I understand why you did this, as some people read slower than others.

I think this story has alot of potential, and is a pretty original idea. I'm looking forward to chapter 2. Keep up the work


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Nittram responds:

Yes, the music is the most important part of this. Try to play it without listening, is not the same.

Anyway, thanks for the review and, of course, for playing!! I promise I will add ways to speed up the text for chapter 2.