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Nov 24, 2011 | 1:36 AM EST
  • Daily 5th Place November 25, 2011

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well, this is my first real submission to ng. make me welcome!

This was originally a loosely defined uni assignment- kinda just had fun drawing random landscapes.
Since submitting it for assessment, I've taken some time to polish some of the effects and clean the whole thing up a little.
If you enjoyed this animation, feel free to rate it highly and show your friends.

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Reviews


PIED3PIED3

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 24, 2011

Good to see you on NG!

I really enjoyed this animation too. The fbf was all smooth and well done, and the lighting and fancy effects blew me away. It was well co-ordinated with the music, and though the start at times felt a little static/slow. However this added to the contrast as the action built up towards the end. So my only really complaint is the pacing, and perhaps not the most amazing concept (though it was well conceived). Good luck with future stuff!


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Dojang responds:

hey man, havn't hung with you since forever!
a fair assessment. detail probably changed as i got more adventerous as the process continued.

thanks for stopping by, man.


SquareHardSquareHard

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 24, 2011

Trippy

For a first submission, this is definitely an interesting one. The animation was very smooth for the most part, and the idea is interesting, but it's just missing that one thing to bring it over to the next level.

Great start though for a first submission. Definitely tripped me out. :D


Dojang responds:

Thanks man, yeah, i think the thing it's missing-that noone's mentioning- is a real narrative. Unfortunately, a caffeine haze isn't the most conducive environment for coherent plot. So instead you get a trip.

Thanks for reviewing!


LuisLuis

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 24, 2011

Promising first submission

This had good mood to it. I think something that irked me was that your running movie clip sometimes hit spots where he steps on what was empty space in the landscape. It was just a matter of tweaking the position of the tween or character, so it woulda been a simple fix. That aside, i did like the 'weirdness' of the piece, particularly when those purple furry guys emerge. Nice work.


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funkster506funkster506

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 24, 2011

Nicely done man.

Animations were great, it had some good music, and is original.
Its going to my favorites.
5/5
9/10



WojoeWojoe

Rated 4 / 5 stars November 24, 2011

Nice Job

The other reviewers have a point about the running thing, it does get a little repetitive... but that really is how some dreams feel like, so much happens so quickly and before you know it your waking up.

The eye at the end was my favorite scene and animation, it was very detailed and looked stunning! Thanks for your submission!! 5/5 8/10


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