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The underage girl

Score:
rated 1.52 / 5 stars
Views:
3,735 Views
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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Uploaded
Nov 22, 2011 | 6:57 PM EST

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Author Comments

This is by far the worst flash i've made, i guess it's expected since it was my first flash ever made. Anyways critiques are definelty appreciated, tell me what i can improve on..... so the next one won't suck so bad -__-

*i cant believe this video got over 1,000 views lol

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IceDragon64IceDragon64

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Seen worse

Just about passable

+quite good art

- I can't hear all the words- needs subs to get through the difficult bits
- No real animation
-colour
-background
-stop/replay
-credits

keep trying- have a bit of patience and try to put something together with some of the above missing features before you submit again.


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