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My very first real attempt for a flash animation. It took me about 18 hours to make and I've learned a lot, had to do some backtracking and stuff. Overall, I'd say I did alright.
I'm interested in what you think.
The animation and sound was pretty good for a first time. Needs a little work. Your audio isn't that bad. Voicing was good. But the joke kind of ruined it for me. I'm not really that big on poop jokes. So...yeah, but the rest was fine. I'll look for episode 2 if you make one.
Thanks for the comment. Yeah, I have a long way to go, and I kind of agree on the joke being a little off, I'm sure I've got something more humorous planned for the future in the series.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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