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I made this as a project for school. Ive been working on it for about two weeks, and I like how it turned out. Please leave feedback, and tell me anything I can do to make it better. Rate, Comment and Enjoy! thanks!
I've seen this before.
Well, the story of this animation is pretty much the exact same concept from James Lee's "Make Snacks, Not War". (The title is even the exact same, but with synonyms instead of the original words) If you wish to make movies in the future, I would suggest you make movies with more original plots, not that is a carbon copy of an already existing work. But onto the actual animation, the animation was pretty choppy, and felt more like an automatic slideshow. Things I would suggest you do is raise the framerate (12, 24, or 30 fps are commonly used) and add more poses in between drawings. Also, music would be nice.
The characters are cute and nice animation. Could use some sound to perk it up a bit. Make food not war!
A little music goes a long way
I picture this in my head with a daunting piano piece that suddenly turns upbeat with the animation, now if I could just see that on the screen I'd be happy!
Nice character design, and decent if somewhat limited animation.
I agree about the sound, but the thing is its a project for school, and if we wanna use music we have to make it on our own :/ Im not a musician, so that wasnt possible for me. Thanks for the feedback though.
A short film about a park bench
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