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Inspired by the notorious YouTube comment.
Full title: I find this difficult to masturbate to...
(doesn't fit in Newgrounds' title limit)
Based on this comic drawn with some friends: http://bit.ly/rCcun4
"Put this suit on!"
Good animation... appropriately creepy D:
I find this difficult to laugh at
I suppose the main purpose of this flash is to amuse and this is something it doesn't do for me, the phrase isn't funny and it really doesn't make for a good joke. The animation and voice acting of this flash however are both good and that works pretty well, the style with it in black and white, well greys, is a decent style too.
Maybe the length is also an issue, but if it's based off a comic then that would explain why it's shorter but it could have gone further if you had added something afterwards, would it have made it more funny? It could have in a way, but not really sure. Basing a flash off a common phrase or a comment, in my opinion, is hard to pull off.
In short, I think everything is good apart from the concept.
Where should I start?
I loved the Animation, it seemed to be very good. The characters were what you wanted to portray them as, however lacked any depth. The comedy seemed to be bland for the most part.
Thank you for your time, have a good day.
I've seen quite a few of your flashes - you have made some great animations. Sadly, this isn't one of them.
I clicked this from the front page before realizing it was by you. It's a great concept, but I felt that the flash kind of fizzled out halfway through - and unlike your recent shorts featuring "the Manwhore", which were at least random enough to elicit some laughs, this one just seemed to go nowhere. I did go and read the comic that was drawn, and while this does work as a comic, it doesn't work as a standalone flash. Hope to see more great flashes from you soon.
A short film about a park bench
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