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Nov 16, 2011 | 5:15 PM EST

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Author Comments

first flash animation, C&C appreciated

EDIT: Thanks alot everybody! didnt expect to get this much feedback at all!
thank you all for the critique as all of them have been useful to me and will allow me to fix/improve my future work



Rated 3 / 5 stars

keep up the good work!

cool vector art even for a first anim, and not bitmap craps, i like! the idea of a moving environment is interesting too..
though, very very short to present already, hence only 6. and the total lack of sound is awkward.. ok, i guess a 5sec loop'd be worse ~
a good start!

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Rated 1 / 5 stars


It isn't really a flash movie, more like an image.


Rated 3 / 5 stars


It's your first animation so I guess I can't rip into it that bad, its a 5 second repeating animation so I guess its OK but try a little harder next time, otherwise good animation no random pixels or paint. Swell job.

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Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Quality material

+ great art
+OK animation
+much potential

-Not a complete enough submission to be what I would consider submitting to the Portal
-needs SOUND
-bats wings need to flap- see my two Halloween subs, it makes all the difference. Work on making a complete, entertaining submission with full credits and a stop/replay button. PM me if you have any trouble doing this as your work is worth supporting, tho this submission is not as it is.

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Rated 3 / 5 stars


It's great artwork, feels like just an image though with nothing to follow.

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