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Starring Jason Bateman, Justin Beiber and guest starring Rick Ross!
I hope you enjoy the SPECIAL TWIST ENDING!!!!
it was strangely amusing but the voice needs work and the story was funny but WTF im not a justin bieber fan but damn
ehh unfunny and too simple
The animation is simple and mostly consisted of tweens. The art was alright and very fit for a cartoon. I see no problems here. I liked the boiling effect that you gave it. The lip-syncing was really good as-well.
Alright now lets move on to what bothered me, the story. I didn't understand anything! You also put too much cursing in your animations that kinda ruined the moment. Was it supposed to be funny?
Something else that I also didn't like were the voices you seem to have edited it so much that it sounds like annoying shrieks.
Overall its unfunny, the only thing I recommend you do is work on your material and also try not to edit the voices too much.
Animation is pretty smooth,just work on the voices.
A short film about a park bench
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