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Eulogy For 'Granpa's story...'

This entry was blammed by our users.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

11-11-11 – 03-08-12

Author Comments

I'm bored so made a voice test for this guy...
And I decided to make an animation out of it.

Reviews


MaartenCMaartenC

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Looking at the score....

And I see an underrated flash, pretty much a shame.

Art: 6/10
It suffices. It's simple, but the animation was good. I'm not sure how much time you put into this, but I see that you at least (can) work patiently. I'd give a 5/10 for the art itself and 1 bonuspoint for the smooth animation.

Voices: 5/10
Not that good, perhaps you can ask different people for voice acting and (perhaps) use a better mic.

Humor/story: *
I'm not gonna review that part, it's (sorry I'm gonna say this,) horribly cliché'd. What I would've liked to see is a new twist to it, you know... perhaps a long flash (in colour?) showing the interesting life of grandpa... This is still not the best idea, but perhaps a start?

I hope I have given a fair review which you can use for further flash, seeing how you can work, I know that with a bit (actually, a lot) of patience you can put even greater work on the flash portal.

Keep it up!
Overall score: 5.5/10, so a 6/10
And I'm gonna rate a 5/5 so the horribly underestimating score can someday reach the 3/5 it deserves : )


AmaranthusAmaranthus

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Umm okay

Try making an effor just dont keep posting things you didnt work long on
Try to make it proffesional

Sorry if that was mean


ChrausnerChrausner

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Let's be honest.

Let's see...(this might be offensive)

Art: 2/10.
The art was really bad, it looked like drawings in black and white which could be done by even the most basic flash creators. You need better quality on the graphics (you can basicly see the rough animation while watching it), color and maybe a bigger screen (but that is unnessesary).

Voices: 4/10.
Seriously, the voices were all done by the same person? You need a dual to execute the co-operation, if you know what I mean. You also need greater quality of the microphone.

Plot: 1/10.
Sorry, dude, but the plot? It's almost nonsense. Everyone can make up that kind of plot. You should make it into an adventure, or great humor. It was really short and didn't REALLY make much sense.

So overall: 2.5/10. But I'm no an asshole, so I'll give it a fair 5/10 for at least trying. You can certainly do better.

P.S: 30 minutes will NOT give you high scores. So here's a tip: when making animations, it's best to check it over about 10 times for any mistakes. It's the only way to sucsess. An animation made shorter than a day will have missing qualities needed for a 3/5 animation. And also, being bored and making a short animation with little effort will NEVER get a good score. If you see many blammed submissions, then you will know why.

Do improve on this. Improving is the key to victory.

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