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Lout (the yellow character) goes to a waterpark to find some fun! Will he manage to enjoy his time there without getting into troubles?
Hello NewGrounds! I'm new here!
This is my very first Flash animation, and I really hope to recieve some reviews and hints, since I love to make cartoons but... ...I shure have to improve myself!
Since I'm a n00b with Flash, I tryed to make a really simple thing for my first experiment... No tweening or interactive buttons!
If I made some mistakes with the uploading then I'm really sorry and I'll try to fix them as soon as possible!
That's all I think... ...hope you'll enjoy my little toon! Thanks for your time!
make more but that water slide isn't for fat people go on a diet dinosaur thing lol
Sheesh. What a horrible way to die.... Chocking on a water slide because your too fat to fit through it...
And so it begins
Hi Pennaz! Welcome to New Grounds. Taking into consideration the fact that this is your first cartoon, I give it an 8. I give it an 8 because the animation was smooth, fluid and not Jittery and mechanical like alot of stuff uploaded by beginners (Nothing wrong with that of course) The design of the characters, sound and story were also pretty good. My one criticism is that nothing is going on in the background, perhaps add a sun, clouds or maybe the park down below.
I enjoyed it, I hope this helps.
Awsome Dragon Kick!
*high fives* =D
*looks down* oh wait, wasent there post to be a fat guy down there?
*shugs* all well My Turn =D
you say this is an experiment and your first flash so im taking that into account: the animation was pretty fluid, it had good humor, and the characters are well drawn :3 i hope to see a sequl (yellow guy should live) and you should keep up the good work with your cartoons, hopefully you'll get pretty far on this site since you seem to have good talent
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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