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Nov 10, 2011 | 5:11 PM EST
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Lout (the yellow character) goes to a waterpark to find some fun! Will he manage to enjoy his time there without getting into troubles?

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Hello NewGrounds! I'm new here!

This is my very first Flash animation, and I really hope to recieve some reviews and hints, since I love to make cartoons but... ...I shure have to improve myself!

Since I'm a n00b with Flash, I tryed to make a really simple thing for my first experiment... No tweening or interactive buttons!

If I made some mistakes with the uploading then I'm really sorry and I'll try to fix them as soon as possible!

That's all I think... ...hope you'll enjoy my little toon! Thanks for your time!

Reviews


JoeyAnimeJoeyAnime

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Interesting

When I first read the description, I thought to myself oh yay another noob this should be terrible but as I watched your flash I immediately regretted thinking that. While this flash has its flaws there are certain instances that showcase your talent not just in your flash but in the very straightforward plot. Sure this idea has been seen many a times but nice little twist at the end made me chuckle in a morbid way. The flash is not as fluid as I have seen in most works but that can just be due to the fact that this is your first flash and as such I would expect to see improvement in later works. Also there seems to be very little background scenery and it feels as if adding scenery would help establish a setting for the plot. The sound was actually better integrated than what I usually see in beginning works and I commend you for that. Other than the animation fluidity I feel that this was an excellent first attempt at a flash. I will keep my eye out for future submissions from you and I hope that you will continue to show improvement as well as innovation.


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babyfaceMClolbabyfaceMClol

Rated 5 / 5 stars

that was really cute :D

I enjoyed it quit a lot.



SonicstarVocaloidSonicstarVocaloid

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Not too bad, Pennaz!

For a first-timer with Flash, you aren't too bad!

I guess it helps that you've been working with Artoonix, huh?



poipoi9poipoi9

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice job!

For a flash beginner this is really good



GroundsKeeperGeminiGroundsKeeperGemini

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Good work! Hilarious

You go through plenty a movies look for something funny then all of a sudden Wam! BAM! Thank You Mam! this was a good one.


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