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Nov 10, 2011 | 5:11 PM EST
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Lout (the yellow character) goes to a waterpark to find some fun! Will he manage to enjoy his time there without getting into troubles?

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Hello NewGrounds! I'm new here!

This is my very first Flash animation, and I really hope to recieve some reviews and hints, since I love to make cartoons but... ...I shure have to improve myself!

Since I'm a n00b with Flash, I tryed to make a really simple thing for my first experiment... No tweening or interactive buttons!

If I made some mistakes with the uploading then I'm really sorry and I'll try to fix them as soon as possible!

That's all I think... ...hope you'll enjoy my little toon! Thanks for your time!

Reviews


FoochFooch

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very good for a beginner!

I actually liked it! I was here since September 2011, and I haven't even gotten my first flash even started!!! 10/10


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LeezoneLeezone

Rated 4 / 5 stars

cool

I liked it, pretty simple, the only thing i might've done would be to have the slide parts move a bit to show thats someone is going throught them, or make it a bit transparent and actually animate it.


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killll11111killll11111

Rated 3 / 5 stars

M?!?

how is this rated M, i dont get it


Pennaz responds:

My fault... ...at first I wasn't shure how to set the violence and nudity since the characters are almost naked and the fat one gets hurt a bit... ...but when I saw that my animation got an "M rate" I realized that probably I was getting a little too excessive so... I fixed it!


GinfurrGinfurr

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I like it!

The animation was smooth, and the characters were of high quality. Though I admit that was a fairly sadistic ending.


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ZiggynessZiggyness

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very Well Done!

I wish my first flash could have been this good. You did very well with the animations, and the sounds matched the cartoony humor. You said you didn't use any tweens for this? That's very impressive! Please, keep contributing. :D


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