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Lout (the yellow character) goes to a waterpark to find some fun! Will he manage to enjoy his time there without getting into troubles?
Hello NewGrounds! I'm new here!
This is my very first Flash animation, and I really hope to recieve some reviews and hints, since I love to make cartoons but... ...I shure have to improve myself!
Since I'm a n00b with Flash, I tryed to make a really simple thing for my first experiment... No tweening or interactive buttons!
If I made some mistakes with the uploading then I'm really sorry and I'll try to fix them as soon as possible!
That's all I think... ...hope you'll enjoy my little toon! Thanks for your time!
I loved the animation and the humor I saw in this. Hope there's a part 2 to be released soon, because I would love to see what happens to Lout. Great job, man!
great job on your first flash keep it up
good job :D
just because you are new to flash, that doesn't mean that you don't already have the know how of how to do a good project. imagination, creativity and talent come first, then the experience comes by itslef.
as far as improvement maybe some faster paced movement. like when the green.....thing jumped on the yellow thing, you know? just some more realistic physics. other than that you are more than ready to tackle some more complicated stuff. good job.
Simple and fun
This was great. Smooth colorful and you got the point across. I think anyone who has gone down a water slide has thought of this scenario at least once. For a first flash this is pretty dang good. Keep it up. If there is anything that you need to do. It would of been the tubes wiggling to indicate where they are. Anyways awesome.
but when ever people write that this is their first animation and then make something this awesome, i get a little skeptic that is really their first
HBO starts targeting children!
What place? Earth!
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