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Nov 6, 2011 | 2:32 PM EST

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okay, so I just learned how to use Flash... today..
so Im like the worlds biggest newbie, but I'll work my butt off to improve!

constructive critism is loved.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 7, 2011

not bad

now all you need to do is add some colour and less detail in the drawings because drawing detailed frame by frame animations can take a long time to complete, and add an interesting plot to it and put in some comedy and you have yourself a new newgrounds winner, oh yeah and some sound of course =D good luck
oh yeah and make it short not too long
if you do this your looking at a 3.5-4.5 rating

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Rated 4 / 5 stars November 6, 2011


This is a great animation for your first try. Much better than mine I might add xD
Keep up the good work! :)


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 6, 2011

shoot better than mine.

My first animation was horrible!!!!! So what if it was short and has no music or sfx or anything, this is a great start! And it seems like you are a very talented artist as well! I WANT to see more from you, and I don't think you will improve, I KNOW you will improve! You have a lot of potential!

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Rated 4 / 5 stars November 6, 2011

Your not the biggest n00b! ^__^

Your animation is great! Keep it up! Practice makes perfect!


Rated 4 / 5 stars November 6, 2011

Good Try

This is a good try for your first animation ever. Keep up the good work. Next time make your work longer. I look forward to seeing more from you.