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Nov 6, 2011 | 2:32 PM EST

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Author Comments

okay, so I just learned how to use Flash... today..
so Im like the worlds biggest newbie, but I'll work my butt off to improve!

constructive critism is loved.

Reviews


MOA-OZZYMOA-OZZY

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

not bad

now all you need to do is add some colour and less detail in the drawings because drawing detailed frame by frame animations can take a long time to complete, and add an interesting plot to it and put in some comedy and you have yourself a new newgrounds winner, oh yeah and some sound of course =D good luck
oh yeah and make it short not too long
if you do this your looking at a 3.5-4.5 rating


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Deer50Deer50

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Wow!

This is a great animation for your first try. Much better than mine I might add xD
Keep up the good work! :)



TheGreeNateTheGreeNate

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

shoot better than mine.

My first animation was horrible!!!!! So what if it was short and has no music or sfx or anything, this is a great start! And it seems like you are a very talented artist as well! I WANT to see more from you, and I don't think you will improve, I KNOW you will improve! You have a lot of potential!


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22kristine22kristine

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Your not the biggest n00b! ^__^

Your animation is great! Keep it up! Practice makes perfect!



DoctorStrongbadDoctorStrongbad

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good Try

This is a good try for your first animation ever. Keep up the good work. Next time make your work longer. I look forward to seeing more from you.