Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
okay, so I just learned how to use Flash... today..
so Im like the worlds biggest newbie, but I'll work my butt off to improve!
constructive critism is loved.
Well this ws something nifty and different I like the drawing side of it but this could be so much better with some color some audio or music and also think about adding a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" to stop the looping.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This would be alot better with some added audio and or sound/fx, no sound at all kinda just brings the quality down, so add something of sound and you have a wide selecion in the audio portal at your desposal. It seemed like an interesting idea on it's own, but it was rather short, which took away from the humor a bit,This was really short, so maybe adding more to it and or adding more short clips to this entry making it a longer more fuller flash submission, so its an idea. maybe adding a few short ones on this one entry would be a better choice. So i see that this movie starts and loops, you can fix that with a stop action code, what that does is stop the loop and it will play when the user/viewer clicks on the play button, now you should have a play button and a replay button aswell, anyways just an idea to make this better.
now all you need to do is add some colour and less detail in the drawings because drawing detailed frame by frame animations can take a long time to complete, and add an interesting plot to it and put in some comedy and you have yourself a new newgrounds winner, oh yeah and some sound of course =D good luck
oh yeah and make it short not too long
if you do this your looking at a 3.5-4.5 rating
This is a great animation for your first try. Much better than mine I might add xD
Keep up the good work! :)
shoot better than mine.
My first animation was horrible!!!!! So what if it was short and has no music or sfx or anything, this is a great start! And it seems like you are a very talented artist as well! I WANT to see more from you, and I don't think you will improve, I KNOW you will improve! You have a lot of potential!
Your not the biggest n00b! ^__^
Your animation is great! Keep it up! Practice makes perfect!
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.