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the title is "the bully - vengeance" because "the bully" is already taken :/
I really loved it. The graphics were very nice and it had good pacing. The effects were amazing.
One little thing; The audio seemed kind of inconsistent. Meaning; You had all sorts of different soundtracks and such.
Try to keep one audio track next time, or try to get more similar music. Also, when the bullies laughed, it seemed out of place KIND OF .
Anyway. I'm nitpicking. So don't worry about that and keep that shit coming!
its not too shabby
i give a seven simply because while the character detail was ok you lacked (for the most part) detailed backgrounds also i really just didnt like the sounds/music used as they just were either generic or didnt transition well or didnt fit the action being performed.... overall its ok , not perfect, not great just ok... keep improving tho because you do have talent and your work will be appreciated on newgrounds bro
I agree with singularity2, however I have to give you credit for the effects. The explosions and the blood were really good! But the audio editing was below average: the tracks stop playing when they're not even near the end, and then a new one starts. Personally, I always animate along with the music. That creates a better atmosphere. The plot wasn't original, but for Newgrounds standards, I'd say it's acceptable.
a bully victim's wet dream
well it needs work
I'll give you a seven because some of the flash was well done, but there are still some flaws that you should realy look at trying to fix in any later creations. The animation in parts seemed to be rushed or just done in a 'could not give a shit' attitude, while others lacked sufficent audio that could have spiced up the actions. Just keep tryin, its almost perfect!
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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