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Nov 5, 2011 | 4:15 AM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place November 6, 2011

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the title is "the bully - vengeance" because "the bully" is already taken :/

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bishopthebluebishoptheblue

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 8, 2011

its not too shabby

i give a seven simply because while the character detail was ok you lacked (for the most part) detailed backgrounds also i really just didnt like the sounds/music used as they just were either generic or didnt transition well or didnt fit the action being performed.... overall its ok , not perfect, not great just ok... keep improving tho because you do have talent and your work will be appreciated on newgrounds bro



dotoriusdotorius

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 9, 2011

Nice,

POSSIBLE SPOILERS:
I agree with singularity2, however I have to give you credit for the effects. The explosions and the blood were really good! But the audio editing was below average: the tracks stop playing when they're not even near the end, and then a new one starts. Personally, I always animate along with the music. That creates a better atmosphere. The plot wasn't original, but for Newgrounds standards, I'd say it's acceptable.



taongkahoytaongkahoy

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 7, 2011

a bully victim's wet dream

'nuff said



HanksHelperHanksHelper

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 7, 2011

well it needs work

I'll give you a seven because some of the flash was well done, but there are still some flaws that you should realy look at trying to fix in any later creations. The animation in parts seemed to be rushed or just done in a 'could not give a shit' attitude, while others lacked sufficent audio that could have spiced up the actions. Just keep tryin, its almost perfect!


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FelixColgraveFelixColgrave

Rated 3 / 5 stars November 11, 2011

Eh...

Stylistically it was basically Invader Zim... but with more shape-tool. The school was even called "Skool" and everything.
Think harder about where your designs are coming from, and try to draw from a greater variety of influences. Because right now your autopilot is just going Vasquez Vasquez Vasquez all over the place.

Pretty tight effects animation though.


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