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the title is "the bully - vengeance" because "the bully" is already taken :/
I really liked it
You avoided actually condoning violence while still showing the depth of anger bullied kids feel. I respect that. The animation was solid and the sound was perfect for it.
Why only a 3.6?
This deserves well over a 4 in my opinion. It's quite sad how things get rated if theyre not a parody or have some other kind of referential humor. :/
But that aside I really enjoyed this. The linework in most parts is phenominal. I suggest you keep it like how it was in the begginning. That makes the cartoon look really awesome. I hope to see more by you in the future! Good luck tooning! :D
you say you never had attended a class? it looks so professionally made! i did notice that at the beginning you used fills , then in the middle part you used lines :)
The art left me breathless! The animation is smooth!
The only bad was that the sound didnt sometime sycn with the movie and you forgot to make the sound quality to 128kbps.
AND I HATE BULLIES!
That wasn't suckish at all...
How dare you think that about your animation, you're really good. I'm also surprised that this is your first full animation without any help because to me it's on par with a lot of the other top animators on this site. That being said, the only problem I had was with the sound which was out of sync at certain moments, but that didn't really detract from the overall quality of the piece here. It's just something to think about in the future. Other than that I thought t was a fantastic short and I look forward to more from you in the future. :)
thanks, I thought it looked kinda bad due to the fact that i kept on replaying the movie looking for any errors or flaws in it. and yeah, there was a problem in making the audio, i split the audio into two, so it's fixed ( or at least i think it is)
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