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the title is "the bully - vengeance" because "the bully" is already taken :/
For your first full animation, this is grade A work. I wuoldve given you a 10, but I think since you are fairly new, i should give constructive criticism. The story needs to be fixed.. Bout it hahaha.
Reminded me of Invader Zim
Especially that supernatural kid - his hairdo is similar to Dib's, the school was titled "Skool," and the dib-person was using supernatural powers, something Dib is known to obsess about.
I'm actually fairly impressed by this. You said this was your first full-length animation? The quality was really good for a first. The music was fitting, if a little low-quality, but you'll get the hang of it with practice.
I also really like the concept of this video. It was well executed, and, in my opinion, and had a nice style for it. I hope you make more :3
I really loved it. The graphics were very nice and it had good pacing. The effects were amazing.
One little thing; The audio seemed kind of inconsistent. Meaning; You had all sorts of different soundtracks and such.
Try to keep one audio track next time, or try to get more similar music. Also, when the bullies laughed, it seemed out of place KIND OF .
Anyway. I'm nitpicking. So don't worry about that and keep that shit coming!
put them to hell
if i can do that all bullies will totaly crazy hahahahhah so no one bullies to other people
Wish come true!!
I want to do this my whole life to those bullies. made them suffer !!!
Where does the wool come from?
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