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This is my first attempt to put anything on the interwebs. This is the first of much (hopefully) to come. Let me know what you think.
This isn't the worst game I've played, but its one of them.
It isn't a challenge at all and it is too boring.
Next time try your best because I know you can improve.
2/5 - 5/10
What you did right:
-Graphics aren't too bad.
-Controls are responsive and not frustrating.
What you didn't do right (or "Why I gave this a low score"):
-No mention of the control scheme.
-No sound, which is kind of disappointing. Not even a "Pew pew!"
-Extremely short with no incentive to play more than once.
How you can improve:
-It's 2011, and not everyone uses just the arrow keys to move things. Add something to the title screen, the loading screen, put a screen up before the game play begins, or add something to your Author's comments about the controls!
-Less "..." and more "pew pew"
-A little bit of an explanation of what's going on before people jump in and play, possibly a story?
-Make the objects the enemy spawns a little smaller, but indestructible. You can literally mash the space key and win within 5 seconds.
-Make the enemy a little tougher. At least three hits to kill him and move on to the next level...
-...also, more levels.
I hope this helps!
Dude, how about some instructions, or at least a little hint somewhere? Instead it's just "click." I have to give you a 2/10, and a 1/5, I'll be surprised if this gets voted in.
As a first attempt i would say this is very good :) keep your work improving with other submissions and im sure you will get many more good reviews to come
how do i play
great idea for a game...
but the arrow keys do not work for this game,i pressed every single button and it still didnt do s**t...
please do something about it i think this game can be good
Welcome to the theatre of your mind, Dale
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