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An idea I've had for a while.
I suggest to use the Expand Movie option.
Additional music by Kevin MacLeod of incompetech.com
Not exactly a "desktop stripper" though... More like a "desktop girlfriend" or "desktop wife". The idea is funny, but it didn't have a real quick wit to it or interesting chemistry between the characters. You could have done a lot more with this, but you didn't.
Good animation, fair graphics, decent humor, and high-quality voice acting though. Good job!
You pretty much spelled out the overall joke of this whole thing. "More like a 'desktop girlfriend'".
I disagree about the chemistry but thanks for the comment.
Papa Don't Preach
The style you presented here is good, I especially liked how you formatted the desktop and the situations used for the stripper. Also it was a nice touch on the main character changing his shirt for each day. The animation is good, but not much is going on and the main character's keyboard typing is a bit lackluster. The story what can I say is freaking hilarious and I think that this could have been taken much further from what you did with it, but anything is possible in sequel land, I was wondering if she would blackmail him with a video she recorded through the computer of him masturbating and send it to his family and friends. The ending although dark is still actually funny and creepy kind of a shame that this wasn't release before Halloween. All in all I liked this.
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Your idea of her blackmailing him is funny, but I think that if I added it it would have somehow messed up with the fairly quick flow of things. Thanks for the review.
It's nicely drawn for a funny cartoon. It sort of has an odd and serious sense of humor. It's sorta funny at the beginning, and at the end if you want to creep people out you did a good job... And somehow i find the F*CK YOU pop-ups funny. But it's to serious for a good laugh
overall a pretty well done job so 4/5 8/10
Very good, the end gave me a feeling in my stomach(or was that the sandwich I ate that made me watch this video???) You have to make more of these!!!
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