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An idea I've had for a while.
I suggest to use the Expand Movie option.
Additional music by Kevin MacLeod of incompetech.com
Just like marriage. . .
It's kinda funny that the stripper is Caucasian, the User is Caucasian, and the child is Hispanic. "Why papa?"
I'll admit I think this the best thing you've done besides from your creepy fetus flash that is... a very silly idea stretched into a pretty well done animation for what your doing, and a nicely display background. my advice to you tho is you should try to get more body movement tho in your characters when there talking tho, and more exaggerated poses in some areas but overall pretty good actually dude
Too weak to get me freaked out, but it's good.
I am just sick in the head, so that explains.
- Artwork and animation are both pretty good
- Humor is there, got a smile out of me two-three times (one when I saw they hanged themselves, biggest smile too. TOLD YOU I am sick.)
- It's pretty lengthy too, didn't feel too short or too long.
- Liked the ending but it's too weak FOR ME PERSONALLY to get me freaked out, as I implied already. I instead smiled because I thought it was funny. Eh..
So yeah I thought it was pretty good, but would have liked a better ending as in, more terrifying. Also the humor didn't suit me personally, but this is all with just me.
Good work, keep it up!
I'm with you on this one, when I wrote them hanging themselves I didn't think it was shocking or anything, I just assumed it was the next logical step.
the stripper was like his wife somehow...
A short film about a park bench
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